Just got critique back on "Rock & Roll Suicide."
It needs work on Angelica's motivations, and to tie Robert and Angelica to each other better and not just the things left between them in their lives. Expand on the fact that Angelica could find other ways to get rent money, which is why Robert knows things won't change even once they've got money.
I'd like to make this story into a larger text. I don't know how long, but longer than ~900 words. It could basically be a much larger story, and I'd like to take it there. It has a lot of ideas surrounding it, but I don't think I want to couch it in those. I want it to be more than the inspiration behind it, I want to move past the temporary motivations which instigated it.
So yeah. Didn't bring up the blog to Professor Katz, not yet. Not brave enough. I'm not a particularly brave person.
~Alicia
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